Some people think that governments should spend more money on sports facilities for top athletes. others argue that this money should be spent for sports facilities for ordinary people. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays there is much controversy over the way of using the budget that the
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specifies for the sport. Some suggest
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money should be invested into professional
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while others argue that ordinary people are the ones who deserve to take benefit of
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money.
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it is noteworthy to bear in mind that
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have brought their countries a lot of accomplishments and should be respected, I agree with the latter view. I will discuss the rationales behind my belief in
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, public health and safety are two subjects that need to be located above all for each
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. These two goals can not be achieved for all of a country's residents unless their
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invests properly in the means that promote them and one of the most blatant ways to be healthy is doing sports.
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, the
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has been providing an area in every neighbourhood for the local people to exercise in the
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decade where not only do their constructions need money but
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guaranteeing their safety needs considerable budget.
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, each human's health should be valuable for the countries' leaders and it will be plausible only by appropriate investment.
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,
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around the world are being sponsored by private companies. For years governmental administrations had been viewed as the most responsible authorities to provide an essential environment for
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to grow but big companies are replacing them recently.
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, Nike has been sponsoring a lot of sportsmen on their way to world competitions. These companies have never shown any interest in investing in public sports facilities whereas their competition is to sponsor professional ones. To sum up, the
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as the most responsible authority in the country has a duty to support either ordinary or professional sportsmen. I believe its responsibility toward ordinary people is much greater because public health depends on it and the ones whose professional careers are sports are being supported by private investors.
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