Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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This
essay will respond to both these perceptions, whether, Linking Words
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time
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, or to get relaxed.
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acts which improve the mental power may tired individual's Linking Words
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For instance
, masses who give their free Linking Words
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mind
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, due to the radiations that omit from these devices. Correct your spelling
head itch
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On the other hand
, getting relaxed and calm during Linking Words
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Although
, they feel that they are wasting their Linking Words
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but
it would be beneficial for them because they can Remove the conjunction
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instead
of neuro Linking Words
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rest
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diseases
, in my opinion, it will be essential to invest the Use synonyms
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rest
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