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Many people feel that students should learn from online materials while others feel that it is better to use printed materials. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #students #materials
When the topic of learning sources is discussed there
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 divided
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.A group of people regard that
student
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 should read from electronic materials ; whereas a few
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 that it is greater to use
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 of books. prior to my
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 both the viewpoints would be discussed. The patrons of the former
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 begin with they get easy access to the materials. In
this
 internet world any kind of
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 are available on that platform people just need
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click
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 to receive elements of specific topics.
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 pupils can learn under the hands of world's expect educator there are various courses on world wide web according to the choice of learner with experienced teacher and approach for books and guides.
For
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leapscholar
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lead scholar
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 online teaching it can really beneficial for those who are
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 to study English proficiency language. On the flip
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 those who defend the latter
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 claim that the foremost reason is printed one reliable than online. it is written by teachers on their own ideas that can enhance boost students
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 and valuable for all time.
Furthermore
 studying offline at couching centre could help them in better understanding towards the topics and ask for any query regarding that. it brings clear
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in
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 their mind as well as extra knowledge of that subject. To sum up and offer my position
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 support
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view
 than the former one. the main
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reason behind
this
 is that learning with xerox material in class
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improves the empathetic idea alone with change to know deep into the matter ;
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 the former
view
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also
 influence students in their own ways.
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