Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the rapid development, young generation becomes a special group which mean the future of the world.
Besides
that, we must mention about
the teachers or Change preposition
apply
parents
as well as the school
. Both home
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homes
use
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uses
different
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a different
way
to develop Fix the agreement mistake
ways
children
but the same is all made them become good members of society.
Different people have to
different Change preposition
apply
way
of teaching, with Fix the agreement mistake
ways
parents
, they teach their daughters and sons since they were little, from the first
word they say to how interact
with adults. Because Add the particle
to interact
parents
can't understand the children
's personalities, can provide for them what they need and take care of them. But it's not always good
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a good
way
, because with children
have parents
over easy sometimes they can do things
that do not know that bad, and for a long time, I will eat too mischievous behaviors
annoy orders.
Growing up, Change the spelling
behaviours
children
have to learn not only from what their parents
teach them but also
about the word. So that they need to go to school
. Going to school
like Add an article
a school
open
a new door with different friends come from many places, it can improve Wrong verb form
opening
children
's confidence to interact with more people, give them a chance to expand knowledge and discover new things
. With children
who do not have a happy family or have mental
illness, friendship can Add an article
a mental
also
help them from negative thoughts. There are some things
that they cannot talk with
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about with
parents
, so they can share with close friends as a Correct pronoun usage
their parents
way
to express feelings. And the teacher was professional skills can help them to become better members of community
. But Add an article
the community
things
are not perfect at all, – do you have some drawbacks that effect
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affect
on
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apply
children
behaviors
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behaviours
such
as best friends, do
bad Wrong verb form
doing
things
like smoking or drunk and bad teacher
with negative thoughts.
In conclusion, the Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
way
we teach children
can make them better or worse, but the teaching of both parents
in school
are
necessary Change the verb form
is
in
their life. But to become good Change the preposition
for
percent
of society Change the spelling
per cent
also
according to children
self on how to behave and things
to make the community better and better.Submitted by Eteacher
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