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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #parents #children #members #society #school #place
In the rapid development, young generation becomes a special group which mean the future of the world.
Besides
 that, we must mention
about
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the teachers or
parents
 as well as the
school
. Both
home
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use
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different
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a different
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way
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 to develop
children
 but the same is all made them become good members of society. Different people have
to
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different
way
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ways
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 of teaching, with
parents
, they teach their daughters and sons since they were little, from the
first
 word they say to how
interact
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 with adults. Because
parents
 can't understand the
children
's personalities, can provide for them what they need and take care of them. But it's not always
good
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way
, because with
children
 have
parents
 over easy sometimes they can do
things
 that do not know that bad, and for a long time, I will eat too mischievous
behaviors
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 annoy orders. Growing up,
children
 have to learn not only from what their
parents
 teach them but
also
 about the word. So that they need to go to
school
. Going to
school
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 like
open
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 a new door with different friends come from many places, it can improve
children
's confidence to interact with more people, give them a chance to expand knowledge and discover new
things
. With
children
 who do not have a happy family or have
mental
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 illness, friendship can
also
 help them from negative thoughts. There are some
things
 that they cannot talk
with
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parents
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, so they can share with close friends as a
way
 to express feelings. And the teacher was professional skills can help them to become better members of
community
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the community
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. But
things
 are not perfect at all, – do you have some drawbacks that
effect
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on
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children
behaviors
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such
 as best friends,
do
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 bad
things
 like smoking or drunk and bad
teacher
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 with negative thoughts. In conclusion, the
way
 we teach
children
 can make them better or worse, but the teaching of both
parents
 in
school
are
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 necessary
in
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 their life. But to become good
percent
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 of society
also
 according to
children
 self on how to behave and
things
 to make the community better and better.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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