It is commonly believed that nowadays main factors that affect a child's development are media, pop culture and friends. A different point of view is that family plays the most significant role. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that

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are mainly influenced by media, pop culture and their friends

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; whereas, it is considered by the others that the role of

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the family

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is significantly vital in the

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of

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. These arguments are supported equally before drawing a reasoned conclusion in

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essay. On the one hand, it is completely true that the role played by the surrounding environment of

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is imperative.

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, they watch

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and international current affairs of society on different platforms of media, and

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is the way they learn music, culture and other things related to the community and the world.

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, when

children

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meet their friends on play dates and

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parties, they get to know about the importance of socializing with others. The influence of outsiders aid

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to develop socially.

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, the importance of outside ambience on the

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of a child can never be denied.

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,

children

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start their intellectual and physical

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at home where family plays a crucial role.

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,

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learn

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,

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and

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from their family members. Siblings often help each

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in their studies. Parents teach their

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etiquettes

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and ethics, these manners are indispensable for them to

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flourish

in society.

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,

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makes it clear that family is essential for a child's

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. In conclusion, both sides of the argument - considering the prospect of main factors affecting the

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of

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- have strong support. It is,

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, agreed that family

as well as friends, media and pop culture all

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have

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equal and significant importance in the

development

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of

children

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.