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Teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree?

#teenagers #community #work #time #benefit
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Nowadays,
teenagers
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 are not contributing enough to unpaid
community
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work
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 in their spare time due to their attachments to many social media activities.
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 the benefits of
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work
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 are enormous for both
teenagers
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 and the
community
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. In my opinion, youth should be required to do volunteer
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 .
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 and foremost, adolescents should do unpaid
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work
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 in their leisure time, since
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 activity helps these
teenagers
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 to avoid doing illegal activities
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 as addiction to drugs or isolate themselves in their own playing video games all the weekdays.
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, psychologists at Harvard University have found that volunteer
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 helps youth to overcome isolation.
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, integrating teens
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work
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 voluntarily creates a strong bond between society and their future citizens. Since adolescents will have contact with a diverse range of individuals,
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 teens will benefit from the experiences of the other,
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 connection between generations could help
teenagers
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 for choose their future job and having more information about different topics.
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, a study of the University of Michigan shows that 70% of teens have chosen their future occupation from the advice and the experiences of elderly people. To sum up, encouraging
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 for integrating unpaid
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work
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 has a lot of advantages for both society and youth,
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 all the citizens should be aware of these benefits.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • mandatory
  • unpaid community work
  • benefit
  • responsibility
  • empathy
  • valuable skills
  • positive impact
  • community
  • social integration
  • cultural understanding
  • personal growth
  • self-confidence
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