A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing

this

letter to apply for your job position. I just saw your advertisement in the newspaper. I have been working at the famous restaurant for 15 years. My position at the restaurant is a waiter. So, I have more experience in

this

position. As I mentioned earlier,

in addition

to having experience I

also

can perform any kind of work in order to support your restaurant.

Moreover

, I personally prefer interacting with people

as well as

enjoy talking to people. Currently, I just decided to resign from my job.

Therefore

, now I have more free time and I can attend an interview whenever you are convenient. If it would be possible, next month is a suitable time for me, because at that time I will come back from my hometown. I was wondering if you could inform me in advance, about some documents that I have to prepare for an interview. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Victor

Submitted by mahawichet on Thu Dec 07 2023

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task achievement

The letter meets the prompt's requirements but lacks detail and development in explanations. Enhance your task completion by providing specific examples that demonstrate your suitability for the job, such as mentioning particular skills or experiences that align with the duties of a waiter/waitress.

coherence cohesion

Your paragraphs should be more clearly focused on individual ideas to ensure coherence. Moreover, including transition words would make the progression of ideas smoother, aiding the cohesion of the letter.

task achievement

The writing tone is somewhat informal and would benefit from more professional language and structure. Stay formal by avoiding contractions, and use phrases that you would typically find in job application letters.

coherence cohesion

The closing of the letter is polite and appropriate, reflecting a decent understanding of the required format. However, the greeting could be improved by trying to address a specific person if the name is known, which shows attention to detail.

6
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

166 words

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