Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Around the globe,
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punishment
pushing
is imposed on anyone found guilty of
commiting
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committing
a crime.
However
, some
poeple
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people
argue that
prison
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sentence
should not be the final resolution to criminal acts
rahter
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rather
favour unpaid
community
work.
On the other hand
,
i
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I
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dont
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don't
consent to
such
flawed thinking and strongly believe that a criminal should face jail
time
.
This
essay will explain why
prison
sentence
is
better
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a better
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punishment
for prisoners than unpaid
community
service. Two factors mainly explain the reasons.
Firstly
, when a prisoner undergoes
prison
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a prison
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sentence
, he realises the magnitude and
consquences
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consequences
of his actions. If a person thinks he can do all he wishes and walk
scotfree
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scot-free
show examples
without stiff
punishment
, the
prison
sentence
with
hush
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a hush
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environment will remind him of the
dare
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conquences
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consequences
ahead of him.
For instance
, if a man raped a woman and only received some unpaid
community
service
instead
of a stiffer
punishment
, he could reason that his actions were just a
mare
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mere
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mistake as opposed to being a criminal act. The
second
reason linked to the
first
is
this
, if a prisoner serves
prison
time
away from
neighborhood
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neighbourhood
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interaction, he would be one less
crimnal
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criminal
to worry about in society. Every criminal should not be part of a normal society with innocent harmless people just
next
to him.
For example
, a thief that has been troubling the
neighborhood
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neighbourhood
show examples
with countless acts of
robery
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robbery
is just given unpaid
community
work as
punishment
instead
of jail
time
, he could even plan another inversion on a different home because he has been granted
chance
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the chance
a chance
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to stick around in an environment he shouldn't be, he can still prey on it again. In conclusion, whether a crime
commited
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committed
seems to be minimal or not, all offenders need not be treated lightly with some simple unpaid
community
work as
punishment
but rather face the full wrath of the law and the eventual
prison
time
. In my opinion,
i
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I
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strongly disagree with
such
merciful acts of unpaid
community
service as
punishment
and support jail
sentence
as the ultimate price to pay for all offenders
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