In some areas of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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, the most prominent reason behind these scenes is the increasing rate of criminals in the countries. Nowadays,

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inflation, lack of jobs, and poverty the ratio of offenders is rising at a high rate

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juveniles are not allowed to go alone if they don’t have any guardians with them.

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, communicable diseases could be another reason for imposing curfews in the countries like U.S.

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, during COVID-19, there was a ban on youngsters to go after the evening for not-so-important tasks. In

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helps to bring discipline and management into the lives of teenagers.

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, they can concentrate more on their academics and score better, if they have some restrictions on them.

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, as per the testimonials mentioned above it is crystal clear that the U.S. rulers impose

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in the country for the safety of its youth either from criminals or diseases. Meanwhile, providing a balanced study and disciplined lives to young people is

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complete response

The essay addresses the question and provides reasons for the opinion given. The relevance to the topic is maintained throughout.

Your opinion

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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