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One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in his new start-up business. Write a letter to him and say - What is your opinion on his new business idea - What have you decided on this matter - What are the reasons for your decision

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Dr Rossi,  I hope you are healthy and safe. Today I am writing
this
 letter to inform you that, I am very delighted that you select me as your
business
 partner.  To embark with, in your letter you said to me that, you want to start a restaurant
business
. Which will be located in Khilgaon. I think it will be a good idea.
In addition
, the place is very crowded
thus
 I think your
business
 will go well.
Moreover
, nowadays people are very food lovers. I think it will be great.
Furthermore
, right now my father wants me to join his
business
. Over and above, these days I am very busy with my studies, and I have to look after my family as well.
Similarly
, I have a part-time job you know that.
Therefore
, I will not be able to do
this
business
 with you.
Last
 but not the least, as my father wants me to join his
business
 I cannot tell him about your idea.
Moreover
, my financial condition is not ok right now, but I wish you all the very best. I hope you will do better in
this
 Sector.  I hope you understand my situation and do not mind. Please come to my place when you get free time. No more today. With love, Zannatul
Submitted by Zannatul Irin on

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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