One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in his new start-up business. Write a letter to him and say - What is your opinion on his new business idea - What have you decided on this matter - What are the reasons for your decision

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Dr Rossi, I hope you are healthy and safe. Today I am writing

this

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letter to inform you that, I am very delighted that you select me as your

business

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partner. To embark with, in your letter you said to me that, you want to start a restaurant

business

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. Which will be located in Khilgaon. I think it will be a good idea.

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, the place is very crowded

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I think your

business

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will go well.

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, nowadays people are very food lovers. I think it will be great.

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, right now my father wants me to join his

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. Over and above, these days I am very busy with my studies, and I have to look after my family as well.

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, I have a part-time job you know that.

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, I will not be able to do

this

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business

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with you.

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but not the least, as my father wants me to join his

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I cannot tell him about your idea.

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, my financial condition is not ok right now, but I wish you all the very best. I hope you will do better in

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Sector. I hope you understand my situation and do not mind. Please come to my place when you get free time. No more today. With love, Zannatul

Zannatul Irin Tue Feb 08 2022

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

218 words

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One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in his new start-up business. Write a letter to him and say - What is your opinion on his new business idea - What have you decided on this matter - What are the reasons for your decision

The Greeting

Too much attention is given to headline-grabbing disasters like earthquakes and floods. Government should concentrate their resources on educating people about the risk they face nearer to home, which can cost far more lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world. what do you think are the main causes of this problem and what measures can be taken to solve it ?

In the modern world, it is possible to shop, work, and communicate with people via the internet and live without face-to-face contact with others. Is it a positive or negative development, in your opinion?