There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved. In your letter, describe the complaints that have been made say why the reception area is important suggest how the reception area could be improved
Dear Sir,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing to outline the complaints that have been made about the reception area, as well as to suggest several improvements to be implemented.
Many visitors expressed their dissatisfaction with our company’s reception area. Since it is not spacious and overcrowded, there are not enough tables to fill in the various papers and chairs to be seated while waiting to be called. In addition
, there is only one receptionist operating with plenty of questions which leads to the place being overcrowded.
Obviously, the area where visitors arrive is extremely important as it is the image of the company, and give the first
impression about the organization.
As a result
, it is beneficial to equip the place with additional furniture for visitors to use and lastly
, hiring a second
receptionist would be advantageous.
I am looking forward to the change being implemented.
Yours sincerely,
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