Today more and more tourist are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.

Nowadays, The number of tourists who are choosing to
travel
to strange
places
such
as
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Sahara
Sarhara
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the Sarhara
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desert or
Antarctic
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the Antarctic
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has incredibly increased during the
last
few years. Going to these kinds of
places
has its advantages and its disadvantages. I personally believe that it has more benefits than its drawbacks. On one hand,
People
who want to
travel
to these special
places
are adventurous and kind of brave Because being
in
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there is not a simple thing to do.
Traveling
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to different
places
brings you plenty of new experiences and lots of excitement.
For
example
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you can see
variety
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a variety
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of animals that can'
t
find anywhere else like polar bears in
Antarctic
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the Antarctic
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Which you can just see them in
this
area.
Moreover
, being in
such
areas which have different climates from other parts of the planet Can
teaches
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you how to survive in
hard
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a hard
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situation
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and bad weather.
For instance
, in
Sahara
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the Sahara
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Desert ,which is one of the driest and hottest regions in the world, the average temperatures
is
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in the summer are over 40 Celsius degree and it is extremely hot and tough to be there.
Also
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you can see how
people
live there and meet new
people
with different cultures can raise your awareness from the world you are living
.
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On the other hand
, we can'
t
deny
its
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drawbacks and hardness of staying there.
Unfortunately
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many
people
travel
to these
places
alone and without any experience of being in tough conditions.
Hence
, they will face
with
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lots of dangerous situations. As an example, a person who has
traveled
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to
the
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Everest knows how
stay
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in the cold weather and he/she is less likely to stuck in a trouble. So, an unskillful person will be in
the
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serious danger of diseases by the weather conditions.
Additionally
, there are many
of
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prelious
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precious
animals that we don'
t
even know them.
Thus
,
traveling
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travelling
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with a tour guide is the best choice for tourists who don'
t
have enough experience of travelling. To sum up ,being in
places
which have hard situations can
brings
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you lots of joy and pleasure plus other benefits it has.
Also
before your
travel
,you need to consider its drawbacks too.
However
, I strongly believe the advantages outweigh
its
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disadvantages.
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