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Do the advantages of government spending their money on college and university fees for student outweigh the disadvantage?

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A discussion about education and costs related has always been permeative and immanent between intellectuals. Some politicians encourage the governmental financial cover for the university syllabus results in a positive impact while others against that to save the budget .
However
 , I am in great accord with the former ideology and the reason for my opinion will be elucidated in the forthcoming paragraphs. On one side of
this
 argument , I believe in the precious adage: that learning is like air and water we must process it rather than
stop
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 it .
Hence
 the decision-makers in each country must allocate a certain amount of the budget to ensure full cover for all education processes even though by securing some resources for that purpose from other support like adding more taxes for certain businesses . Stepping out of our comfort zone is risky.
By contrast
, it will allow us to think outside the box and think about the positive impact of
this
 attitude.
on the other hand
,Some people cannot afford school expenses.
however
 ,their offspring was very clever and intelligent.
consequently
,they will direct them to work to support them in their fight against life expenses.
For instance
 , we will lose a new active and brilliant generation.
Hence
 conclusively , the learning process is very precious
furthermore
 the government responsibility is to carry over
this
 task , similar to health and national security.
therefore
, if the parliament gives
this
 task to the people surely they will not consider it.
Hence
 negative impact and more developing countries will arise.
last
 but not least , we can predict the learning process is very important and
by contrast
, we must give freedom for the students to enrol in private academies or governmental as they will decide. after throughout analysis of
this
 subject ,it is predicted the adverse effect of the debate will be greater if no action from the government.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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