For the development of a nation, governments have to improve and expand the businesses that will help to increase the economy of the country and
also
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able
to compete with other advanced countries. But, Correct word choice
enable it
this
advancement somewhere affects the local societies and businesses rapidly, Linking Words
besides
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local culture of every region is Linking Words
ended-up
very soon. I partially agree with Correct your spelling
ended up
this
argument and in Linking Words
this
essay, I will discuss the reasons why development is important and what should we do to build a good relationship between small businesses and local communities.
There is no doubt that Linking Words
government
Correct article usage
the government
construct
the larger buildings in every city of their nation, to earn more taxes from their country folks, by borrowing the shops to them for selling the products or services. Wrong verb form
constructed
This
is possible because of advancements in technology, which helps to expand the small markets into supermarkets, where all are items available that are somewhat not available Linking Words
n
the local markets. Change preposition
in
Moreover
, Linking Words
this
expansion assists the customers Linking Words
to buy
things and Change preposition
in buying
pay
the bill Wrong verb form
paying
with
self-checkout Change preposition
through
instead
of searching for staff. Linking Words
In addition
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this
, the advancements in supermarkets provide job opportunities to many youths in the front section Linking Words
as well as
the back section,like, the warehouse.
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On the other hand
, there are some drawbacks to supermarket expansion. Linking Words
Starting with
main and most effective is Verb problem
With
shut
down the business of small owners who earn some money from their daily selling and Fix the infinitive
to shut
fulfil
the Wrong verb form
fulfilling
need
of their family members. Fix the agreement mistake
needs
Furthermore
, the bond between the local Linking Words
cultural
and local business going to Replace the word
culture
weaker
every day, because Add a missing verb
be weaker
then
consumers prefer to buy things from big malls rather than visiting the small shops which are nearby their hometown. Linking Words
For example
, in the past time, everybody likes to buy products from their town market, because of the quality of the item and Linking Words
easy
Correct your spelling
ease
to buy
without wasting time Change preposition
of buying
in
travelling to city malls. But, now consumers are always ready to go out and go shopping in big malls.
In conclusion, I think it is the responsibility of everyone and governments to always keep a good bond within the local societies because the future generation will learn from our present. So, if the present discloses the traditional culture Change preposition
apply
then
the poor person will not feed their family.Linking Words
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