In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

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Over the
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freedom. Curfew is followed in some places of America for the teenagers are not allowed to go outside after midnight
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they go outside with an adult.
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, the USA, in some parts are
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after midnight for the teens never be go outside alone because they are not
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mature,
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, they can easily believe anyone or anything,
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, a recent report by the New York Times said that more than 40% of America's pre-adults face numerous problems who are gone outside after dark times. To be more elaborate, the Curfew is the best chance
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the teens might be gone outside after dark,
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law can be protected the pre-adults of the US from negative consequences.
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mature persons, because the adult can handle all problems. In the US, some residential places are available near the forest,
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, always wild animals cross the road, especially at midnight while the boyhoods are together with a mature person, they can handle the difficult situations.
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, in many places, in the US, adolescents should come with youth at night
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as pups and parties.
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, they can stay away from
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dangerous situations. To conclude, an adolescent cannot go outsight after dark times by the curfew is imposed in the US,
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, they can be safe. They might be gone with youth ,
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, adults can be handled all troubles.
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, in my opinion, about
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, an adolescent can go outside with any mature persons,
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, I strongly agree with the latter opinion. I hope
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process is conducive to building a safe society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enforce
  • juvenile
  • repercussions
  • autonomy
  • adolescence
  • paternalistic
  • delinquency
  • municipality
  • ordinance
  • authoritarian
  • peer pressure
  • social dynamics
  • civil liberties
  • community policing
  • preventative measures
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