The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The pie chart indicates the
percentage
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of ages of the population of Yemen and Italy from 2000 to 2050. In
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, the
percentage
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of
people
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over 60 shows an upward trend from 3.6 in 2000 to 5.7 in 2050. And it had a rise which increased 10
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percent
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from 46.3
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percent
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in 2000 to 57.3
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percent
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in 2050, about the
percentage
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of
yamen
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between 15 and 59.
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,
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the years
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2000 to 2050 saw a decrease in the number of children under the age of 14 in
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from 50.1% to 37%. The trend showed
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surge in the proportion of
people
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over 60 which grow 20% from 2000 to 2050.
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, there was a decrease in the
percentage
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of
people
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who are in 15 to 59 from 61.6
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percent
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to 46.2
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percent
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. And a fall can be found in the number of children who are under the age of 14 from 14.3% in 2000 to 11.5% in 2050.
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, in 2000, Italy had nearly 15% more
people
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aged between 15 and 59 than the
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, but in 2050 it is estimated to be about 10% less. In both countries, the proportion of the elderly is increasing,
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the
percentage
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of children under 14 is declining.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, yamen, people, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • population distribution
  • age group
  • population pyramid
  • projections
  • young population
  • aging population
  • demographic shift
  • increase in elderly population
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • population dynamics
  • top-heavy
  • balanced age distribution
  • healthcare needs
  • pension provision
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