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in the future nobody will why printed newspaper and books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Looking at the present era, due to the advancement of technology
next
 generation of infants thinks about why we
use
 a physical copy of magazines and other study materials
instead
 of we are able to find and read everything on the
internet
 without paying cash.
Thus
, the dilemma of it being needed for the
next
 generation raises lots of controversies. The
further
 paragraphs will be describing both sides of the coin before showing a concrete decision at the end. To commence with, the world and children have become more and more clever.
Next
-generation children
use
 the huge amount of
internet
 in their daily life.
Furthermore
, uses of technology in our routine, life becomes easier compared to without it.
In addition
, colleges and schools
use
 modern apps to take online classes and provide all education material online.
However
, for making paper material, need to cut down trees and plants.
Therefore
, global warming and other pollution are increasing regularly.
Subsequently
, making physical copies of books and community needed machinery and employment as well while online material gets found easy and priceless. To exemplify, before covid 19 many societies prefer to read weekly from xerox copy whereas after covid 19 more people uses online copy for reading the daily news.
Thus
, online material saves the environment as well
second
 and wealth.
In contrast
, more utilisation of the
internet
 causes eye problems.
Additionally
, due to most of the work shifts on the
internet
, more and more communities become unemployed.
Also
, usage of the
internet
 saves years and bills but sometimes it gets hacked by hackers.
Consequently
, sometimes server goes down on schools or government websites, that space students and local society can not get download books or paper.
Therefore
, the
use
 of
internet
 life become easier but sometimes it becomes giant evil. To recapitulate, the aforementioned information above, I certainly agree because the benefits of the
internet
 weigh more compared to drawbacks.
As a result
, technology saves pay, the past and the environment and make like simple and modern
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Technological advancements
  • Digital content
  • Environmental concerns
  • Tactile experience
  • Production costs
  • Distribution costs
  • Digital divide
  • Digital fatigue
  • Print media
  • Credibility
  • Permanence
  • Collectibility
  • Aesthetic value
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