Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Environmental problem is a catch-up term that refers to any environment-involved changes most of which are negative. As
the
industrialization Correct article usage
apply
proceeding
, much attention has been paid Wrong verb form
proceeded
on
these problems as some people suggest that the main one is the loss of Change preposition
to
species
in current
time while others Correct article usage
the current
opposed
Add a missing verb
are opposed
for
the more significant problems. From my perspective, Change preposition
to
however
, it is hard to decide which one
are the most important.
Some plants Correct pronoun usage
ones
such
as oak tree
and grass serve as a natural shelter for other animals which prevent them from low temperature and flood. The loss of some particular Fix the agreement mistake
trees
species
of plants makes lots of animal
nowhere to go Change to a plural noun
animals
thus
die from these devastating environmental conditions, causing even
more severe decline in biological diversity. Correct article usage
an even
Besides
, some species
such
as worm
have a function to decompose poisonous organic Fix the agreement mistake
worms
compound
and gas in nature. It is obvious that Fix the agreement mistake
compounds
disappearance
of these Correct article usage
the disappearance
species
can make poisonous substance exists for more time, greatly harming people’s health once inhaled.
Meanwhile, it is admitted that there are other environmental issues that can’t be ignored. For instance
, the
global warming, Correct article usage
apply
which
is caused by Correct pronoun usage
apply
excessive
emission of carbon dioxide. A direct negative result it brings is that people feel more scorching even in the living place. Correct article usage
the excessive
Furthermore
, accelerated melting speed of iceberg in poles is expected with higher temperature, raising the level of sea
and the land is Add an article
the sea
consequently
submerged. Because of it, human’s living space is diminishing at an alarming rate.
As analyzed above we can conclude that every environment
problem should be taken into consideration for its potential destructive consequence. In order to protect the environment, the government is supposed to take viable and feasible actions Replace the word
environmental
such
as advocating an environment-friendly lifestyle. And what we can do as a beginning to follow the policy made by government
is to take commune transportation Add an article
the government
instead
of private cars.Submitted by 450617532 on
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