The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantage and disadvantage to having one language in the world?

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makes
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in the world connect and link
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English
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language
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connected and
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to be spoken globally.
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market and
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numerous advantages to the development of society.
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Indonesia they do know how to speak Indonesian and they can
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. It can be clearly seen;
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has a vital role to be global
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to diminish the
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worldwide have a positive value and make
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know each other.
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, using only
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language
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will reduce the local
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do not respect with home culture when they are visiting another country because they
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and
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become a global threat to the local society.
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will decrease rapidly from the local resident that using
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a
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to having
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generalization
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that only
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accepted in communication. In conclusion, the development of
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English
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language
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to be spoken globally and
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have drawbacks to the local society.
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