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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantage and disadvantage to having one language in the world?

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The global development of
tourism
 makes
people
 in the world connect and link
one
 each other. It is
also
 contributed to
the
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English
 as
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language
 that
use
 for communication in the current condition. It makes
people
 connected and
English
 becoming
one
 of
languages
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the languages
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 to be spoken globally.
This
 essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks
from
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both sides in the upcoming paragraphs. On the
one
 hand,
people
 need a
language
 that
use
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 as a bridge in communication
particularly
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 in
tourism
.
Tourism
 is
one
 of
business
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which
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 has
global
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 market and
provide
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 numerous advantages to the development of society.
For example
,
people
 from Nigeria visited
to
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Indonesia they do know how to speak Indonesian and they can
use
English
. It can be clearly seen;
English
 has a vital role to be global
languages
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 as easiest as
bridge
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a bridge
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 to diminish the
language
 barrier. Meanwhile, spreading
the
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English
into
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the
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worldwide have a positive value and make
people
to
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know each other.
On the other hand
, using only
one
language
 in
tourism
 will reduce the local
language
.
This
 leads to
people
 do not respect with home culture when they are visiting another country because they
use
 or communicate only in
English
. The effect of
this
 will
be continue
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 and
English
 become a global threat to the local society.
As a result
,
local
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language
 will decrease rapidly from the local resident that using
as
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 a
language
. Another
disadvantages
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 to having
one
language
is
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generalization
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a generalization
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 that only
English
as
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 accepted in communication. In conclusion, the development of
tourism
also
 contributes to
the
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English
 as becoming
global
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a global
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language
 that
use
 to be spoken globally and
also
 have drawbacks to the local society.
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