People buy good products that work, therefore, advertising is unnecessary and is no more than a form of entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

We are living in a modern era,so the advancement of technology

enable

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enables

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ample amenities for people in the form of

advertisements

,

therefore

these days,many individuals tend to purchase products according to the announcement given by the particular item of a landlord,but others say that it is unessential to follow a notice because people have an ability to choose which

product

is the best.I completely disaccord with

this

statement. To embark on,there are ample benefits of using

advertisements

.

firstly

,we do not want to struggle which

product

is the best to buy.

secondly

,

advertisements

will compensate the right directions to people like how to use products and how the outcomes will come without errors,so nowadays many youngsters tend to purchase electronic gadgets by seeing the

advertisements

just sit at a home without struggling.

for instance

,when I was young,there were no

such

facilities,so my parents used to go outside to take products,but they did not know which

product

is the best,

thus

they just bought items which were kept on the shelves,

as a result

,they lost their items within a few days. On another hand,some individuals feel that

advertisement

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advertisements

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can be distributed while watching movies and shows.

moreover

,most of the announcements are fake because they want to earn money by giving

a positive announcements

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positive announcements

a positive announcement

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.

furthermore

,

cost

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the cost

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is very high because they add an extra charge for production as well as sometimes announcements will confuse the buyers.

for example

,

advertisements

are support

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are supported

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each and every

product

,so customers can be get confused about the quality of

product

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the product

a product

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. To conclude,

although

advertisements

play a crucial role in the world,

but

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apply

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everyone should be very

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careful

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carful

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careful

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while choosing the

product

.