Childhood obesity has become a serious problem in recent years. What are the primary causes of this? What measures should be taken to reduce childhood obesity?

Nowadays, there are more and more overweight children around the world. To probe deeply about

this

serious issue,

this

essay will discuss some major reasons and provide suggestions to decrease the ratio of overweight kids.

First

and foremost, the rapid development in

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the fast

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food

industry offers not only adults but

also

kids a convenient environment to get junk

food

.

However

, though fast

food

is

convenience

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, the high quantity of grease in the meals often makes young people consume too much grease and over their daily needs.

Moreover

,

beverage

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the beverage

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becomes so popular that almost every child would have a bottle of drinks a day. Some of them even drink

beverage

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beverages

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to replace consuming water because they prefer the sweet taste. In fact, scientists have already proved in many experiments that sugar could lead to fat

,

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if people keep

to consume

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consuming

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sweet

food

without self-control.

In other words

, the high contained sugar in drinks is

also

a primary factor of childhood obesity. To decrease the population of childhood obesity, fast

food

restaurants could change their recipes for the young groups.

For instance

, those restaurants could offer special meals which have fruit salads and

less

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oil dishes.

Additionally

, governments could promote healthy meal thinking into school courses to encourage students to eat

healthy

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healthily

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.

Furthermore

, physical education courses should make sure all the students have

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good

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exercises during the class

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so that pupils can keep in shape. In conclusion,

eating

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the eating

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habits of children are some of the main factors in

this

terrible matter. If we want to reduce childhood overweight problems, some actions must be done. After all,

fat

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the fat

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issue could cause many diseases and force young individuals to meet physical problems when they

growing

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up.