With the rapid advancement of communication technology: smart phones, tablets and other mobile devices, some people believe that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a tremendously controversial notion heating up a debate whether the high-speed improvement of

communication

machinery namely smartphones, tablets and other mobile devices do more harm than good. From my perspective, I partially do not have a consensus with

this

idea.

Instead

, I would contend that

this

phenomenon has equal pros and cons. Without a shadow of a doubt, the rapidly developing

technology

of

communication

brings about a wealth of benefits to human society. In

this

day and age, the more

technology

develops, the more people have the opportunity to work as well as get access to education in any certain situation, including outside office hours through mobile

communication

devices.

Hence

, the productivity of studying and working will be promoted and enhanced, thereby the country can be greatly developed.

For example

, in Vietnam, the Covid-19 epidemic is still happening comparatively complicatedly so the governors

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had to apply a policy of teaching online for all pupils and working at home for some specific occupations on a mass scale, which helps students not to stagnate in their learning journeys and the country’s economy is

also

not to be delayed due to the lack of labour workforces.

Thus

, there is an eclectic mix of perks observed during the evolution of

technology

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communication

process. While the redeeming features of boon are widely acknowledged, its counterpart still lingers. For the time being, relying on top-notch

communication

technology

tools

such

as smartphones has made people gradually become inactive and always in a passive status, which leads to their mental and physical health

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severely affected.

For instance

, if children learn online for too long, they will be delirious and can not focus properly on the lesson;

moreover

, being glued to the computer screen during the whole studying duration results in their poor eyesight and

this

is the flip side of the learning online policy adopted in the Covid-19 pandemic. Thereupon, the expeditious advancement of

communication

technology

has abundant dire consequences for humans. To sum up, I consider myself not an advocate of

this

prejudice since

communication

via cutting-edge

technology

devices has advantages and equivalent disadvantages.