You saw an advertisement for a tennis course in England but you have one or two problems and can’t stay the whole course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my interest in a four-month

tennis

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course

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offered by you as per the advertisement in a local newspaper in England. I have been playing

tennis

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for the past six months but want to practice it professionally.

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is because I want to get selected in the national team of

tennis

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and for that, I need to learn some tactics that I expect to learn from

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course

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, your institute is best known for practice sports.

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, I cannot attend

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full

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because my final examinations will be conducted after 12 weeks;

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, I will attend

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course

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only for 3 months. As I have already enrolled for

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course

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month in advance when my examinations are yet to be announced, I request you for a refund if possible. Being a foreign student, I have to manage all my expenses but urge to continue my passion.

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, I am looking forward to your kind consideration on

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matter so that I can fulfil my dream of practising

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under your guidance. I can be reached at my e-mail [email protected]. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, Amandeep Kaur

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea. This will help make your writing clearer and more organized.

task achievement

While your letter effectively communicates your situation, adding a bit more detail about how the course aligns with your tennis aspirations could make your case stronger.

task achievement

Your letter maintains a polite and formal tone, which is appropriate for the context.

coherence cohesion

You have logically organized your letter into distinct paragraphs, each addressing a different part of your message.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

205 words

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course director
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