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modern technology is changing our world This has advantages such as bringing people together through communication it also has disadvantages such as destroying differences between cultures To what extent agree or disagree ===========================================

#technology #world #people #communication #differences #cultures
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Today is
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 of
modern
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 era and there are a lot of changes
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 place
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. As
everthing
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everything
 have both sides like pros and cons. So latest innovations
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 have some benefits like
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 helps in bringing
people
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 closer and
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 disadvantage of damaging cultures in society. I totally agree with the statement and explain my
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views in the upcoming paragraphs. As communication is necessary between individuals to maintain relationships. With the help of modern technology, at present
people
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 can communicate any part of the world anytime. They can even see their family members, relatives who are living in foreign countries through video calling. The one best method of communication which is most popular
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 is chatting, which delivers messages instantly to
other person
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another person
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 who is living far away from us.
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ease
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 the life of individuals and provide some comfort in life.
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 is very helpful in
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 and emergency when
people
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 need to transfer any message
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immediately
.
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, new technology
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destroy
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 our relationships as
people
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 are now becoming too dependent on it which damages our cultures like
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 festivals or on special
ocassions
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occasions
people
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 visit
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each others house to give them greetings and gifts. But due to
latest
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 technology they do not feel any need to personally go anywhere, they only call or send text messages to their relatives which destroy the feelings of
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society
 and rituals of the
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occasions
. To conclude, in today's busy world nobody have time to personally visit everywhere and give them message personally, so modern methods of
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technology
 are
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 way to transfer them as early as possible. No doubt, it destroys our relations to some extent but communication is necessary, it will be in any form and
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also
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 keeps them in touch
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 each other, no matter in any form.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • revolutionize communication
  • global relationships
  • cultural exchange
  • cultural homogenization
  • diminish traditions
  • uniform global culture
  • cultural elements
  • dilute traditions
  • dominant languages
  • marginalizing
  • communication tools
  • cultural preservation
  • intercultural connectivity
  • cultural identity
  • cultural diversity
  • positive and negative outcomes
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