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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? and do you thinkg it is a positive or negative development?

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To make
people
 buy their product, many companies resort to intensive
advertsing
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advertising
. During
this
 time and age, every product that has been released before undergoes some form of
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 at one point in time.
However
, for
people
 to get
this
 new item, the manufacturer has to entice
people
 to have it, claiming it has new additions.
This
 essay will determine why companies do so and whether it is a negative or positive
impact
. The reasons why businesses do emphasise on their new
additiongs
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additions
addition
 is mostly due to the following reason. Primarily, they feel that any new additions made to it should be given out to
people
.
For example
, a phone producing company can
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claim
 its recently released device is new simply because they have added one new feature or application to it
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 the way it was before. Considering the outcome of
such
 claims, it is highly unlikely that positive results come to the fore. In my opinion,
this
 tends to become a negative development .
This
 is mainly due to the fact that despite these manufacturers knowing that hardly anything has changed about their items, they still want to deceive the masses
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acquiring
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.
In other words
, every new feature should be able to have a significant
impact
 on
people
's lives if it is to be deemed as having a positive effect but if it doesn't,
then
 it is as good as not having any upgrade at all. To illustrate, if a phone's only new addition has been an ebook application
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 most
people
 would not even attempt to use in
thier
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their
 lives,
then
 nothing has been added due to its trivial
impact
 on them. In conclusion, most businesses usually spend
alots
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lots
a lots
 of money trying to make
people
 buy their product because
that is
 the only way they can get a profit from the items made.
Inspite
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In spite
 of
this
, the target market are disadvantaged because that minute
additiong
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addition
additions
 has little or no
impact
 on their lives.
This
 is why
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 believe it offers no positive influence on
people
.
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