The advent of the Internet has made it possible for people to work from home. Do you feel this working arrangement has more advantages or disadvantages? Share personal examples in your essay.

Technology has impacted the way of working . The discovery of the internet has made

possible

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for people to

work

from their

home

instead

of their offices. In my opinion,

this

arrangement has more advantages than disadvantages. In the

followings

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following

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, we will show , how working at

home

is

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a benefit

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benefit

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beneficial

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for people or employers by giving them

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a

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lot of opportunities and

help

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helping

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them to save

cost

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costs

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.

Firstly

, the biggest advantage is that people can

work

flexible hours.

This

mode is helpful for women who have young children. Many of them who quit their job after the birth of their children are now back in the job market.

Secondly

, employers

also

benefit from

this

arrangement. When employees

work

from their homes, the cost of running the business comes down. Working from

home

saves valuable resources. Less commuting means less travel.

This

can result in significant fuel savings and cleaner air. To conclude, there are several advantages to

work

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from

home

. Many employers have already realized

this

and started encouraging their workers to do so . In the future, we will certainly have more organizations formalizing

this

route