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Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Otherhowever, think that there are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.s,

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It is argued that giving
money
 to the ceremonies
such
 kinds of wedding
parties
, birthday
parties
 and other types of celebrations is just killing
money
 by some sort of communities.
However
, others think
on the contrary
 way and argue that it is really compulsory for the whole society.
This
 essay will discuss both views and give my own opinion below as well. On the one hand, spending huge amount of cash in order to make big
parties
 truly wasting budgets. Because it is demanded to spend huge numbers of
money
 to organize
parties
, so some people prefer to use
this
 particular cash for other beneficial conditions. For
instead
: despite spending these types of
money
 just for the single party, it will be incredibly beneficial directing them to the poor public.
Thus
, helping them to build their own houses or feeding them with foods will be extremely useful not only for poor’s but giving lots of opportunities to develop that country too.
On the other hand
, organizing big
parties
 like birthday or wedding has it is own advantageous sides. Because, it is very good way of entertainment and relax for society.
For example
: all around the world big amounts of individuals are used to work every day and giving them a chance to make these types of ceremonies will increase their productivity at their work place and
furthermore
 in their personal lives. In my opinion, organizing these events have it is advantageous and disadvantageous sides as mentioned. If it comes to me, despite wasting
money
 I totally agree with making them for relaxations.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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