The charts below show the results of a survey on happiness ratings for married and unmarried people in the US, and the effect of children on the overall ratings of married couples.
The Chart shows us the percentage of pleasure between two groups of single and married individuals.
In
addition
it has Add a comma
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also
been measured and observed that having a child
has an effect on couples in the U.S.
According to the
first chart, it shows us that four different year groups are happier than the singles at the same Change preposition
The
age
, which shows us that being committed with
someone can make you feel more positive emotions and could potentially have an effect on you. The enjoyment level among marital status Change preposition
to
have
varied between 40 and 45 Change the verb form
has
percent
. Younger Change the spelling
per cent
age
groups like 18-29 years tend to be more happy and satisfied then
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than
people
from 50-64 years of age
, also
another thing that caught my eye is that older people
have the same level of happiness and satisfaction in life as the
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apply
people
that are 30-49 years old which i
would have never thought.
Married couples with children under the Change the capitalization
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age
of 18 are happier than the other two categories, which have only an 18-year-old child
or no child
at all. People
with a youth under the age
of 18 take first place with 44 percent
, followed by those who do not have a Change the spelling
per cent
child
with 43 percent
, and bonus 41 belongs to the Change the spelling
per cent
third
group of couples with an 18-year-old and only a child
with 41 percent
.
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per cent
Overall
, the data shows that married people
have a higher quality of life than unmarried people
, regardless of whether or not they have children.Submitted by z.pfister on
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