The charts below show the results of a survey on happiness ratings for married and unmarried people in the US, and the effect of children on the overall ratings of married couples.
The given
chats
are showing statistics about the Correct your spelling
charts
happiness
of couples
in
different ages. They are comparing married and unmarried Change preposition
of
couples
and if they have children
or not.
According to
the information from the graph, married couples
in all age
groups are more happy
than unmarried Replace the words
happier
couples
. The biggest difference between married and unmarried couples
when it comes to happiness
is in the age
group 18-29. Unmarried couples
only have a happiness
rating of 21 percent
on average, in comparison to that married Change the spelling
per cent
couples
in this
age
group have
a feeling of Correct pronoun usage
who have
happiness
from
about 45 Change preposition
of
percent
.
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per cent
According to
the graph, couples
who are married are the happiest in the age
stage of 18-29. Couples
who are not married are the most happy
with 34 Change the adjective
happiest
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
,
when they are 65 or older.
The stage where married Remove the comma
apply
couples
feel the most happy
is when their Change the adjective
happiest
children
are under 18. When married couples
have children
who are already older than 18 they don’t feel that happy. In comparison to married couples
with no children
they even feel less happy than them.
Add a comma
,children
Overall
, the chart presents a lot of information about the happiness
of couples
in different life situations and you can take out from the graphics that married couples
with children
or not are more happy
than unmarried Replace the words
happier
couples
no matter which age
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