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Everyone should be vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#meat #diet
A vegetarian
diet
 has been
proved
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 healthier than a regular
diet
 which contains
meat
.
Furthermore
,
meat
 industries are really harmful to the environment and often brutal to the animals.
However
, I think everyone should be free to eat what they want; some little changes in eating and buying
meat
 could benefit the world and reduce the drawbacks that it has on the human body. Industries that make
meat
 products are well known to be harmful to the environment due to their carbon footprint.
That is
 one of the main reasons people choose to eliminate
meat
 from their
diet
 and become vegetarian. We could fix
this
 issue by letting operate in the
meat
 industry only the companies that care about the carbon footprint they make and that respect their animals.
In addition
, it has been proved that consuming too much
meat
 could cause cancer. Science laboratories recently discovered that eating too much
meat
 can seriously harm the human body. Cancer is one of the things scientists said it can appear in someone whose
diet
 is mostly made of
meat
, in fact,
this
 is another big reason people choose to become vegetarian.
However
, consuming less
meat
 certainly reduce the risks. In conclusion, I think consuming less
meat
 and buying it from companies that care about the environment, are two good ways to crucially reduce the carbon footprint that
meat
 companies make and to reduce the risks of cancer.
That is
 why I think everyone should be free to eat what they want and to do not become vegetarian. Eating
meat
 should be done in a conscious way in order to benefit the world and ourselves.
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