Some people think that the news media nowadays have influenced people's lives in negative ways. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Over the

last

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two or three decades, media has been improving

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tremendously

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than ever before due to innovation of the technology, especially in the

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media.

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, some believe that the

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media is provoked an enormously mankind's live in negative path. I partially agree with

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statement and the already stated essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. To commence with,

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broadcast can provide

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plenty of good things to the population,

people

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can obtain a lot of information from the announcement channel not only the local report but

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the world.

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, previously mentioned can create more social awareness,

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, humankind can get more knowledge from that.

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, a deadly disease which is CoronaVirus,

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publishing is the main reason for

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have been getting a plethora of

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knowledge

about the virus and vaccine detail too. So,

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publishing can help

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the population get awareness.

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, certainly, the already stated can influence mankind's live in

negative

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a negative

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way because humankind

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the only chance to understand and know about any incident

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by the

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route.

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, they might provide false and fake information

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of actual detail,

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people

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can suffer negatively.

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, in the pandemic situation, the broadcast medium has created numerous panic to the population about coronavirus,

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, countless mankind lost their lives.

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, these kinds of

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publishing

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influenced humankind's

live

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wrong

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path. To conclude, when all things considered, I am convinced that these parts of

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medium provide benefits as well as influence negative way.

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, I partially agree with the thing indicated statement in the above-mentioned details and I believe that

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would be picked which is correct or incorrect.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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