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Some people think that the news media nowadays have influenced people's lives in negative ways. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #news #media #lives
Over the
last
 two or three decades, media has been improving
tremendoulsy
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tremendously
tremendous
 than ever before due to innovation of the technology, especially in the
news
 media.
However
, some believe that the
news
 media is provoked an enormously mankind's live in negative path. I partially agree with
this
 statement and the already stated essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. To commence with,
news
 broadcast can provide
a
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plenty of good things to the population,
people
 can obtain a lot of information from the announcement channel not only the local report but
also
 the world.
In addition
, previously mentioned can create more social awareness,
as a result
, humankind can get more knowledge from that.
For example
, a deadly disease which is CoronaVirus,
news
 publishing is the main reason for
people
 have been getting a plethora of
knowlege
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knowledge
 about the virus and vaccine detail too. So,
news
 publishing can help
to
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the population get awareness.
On the other hand
, certainly, the already stated can influence mankind's live in
negative
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a negative
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 way because humankind
have
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 the only chance to understand and know about any incident
happens
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 by the
news
 route.
Moreover
, they might provide false and fake information
instead
 of actual detail,
consequently
,
people
 can suffer negatively.
For instance
, in the pandemic situation, the broadcast medium has created numerous panic to the population about coronavirus,
thus
, countless mankind lost their lives.
Hence
, these kinds of
news
 publishing
is
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 influenced humankind's
live
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in
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wrong
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the wrong
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 path. To conclude, when all things considered, I am convinced that these parts of
news
 medium provide benefits as well as influence negative way.
Therefore
, I partially agree with the thing indicated statement in the above-mentioned details and I believe that
people
 would be picked which is correct or incorrect.
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