Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

Environmental problems are becoming more severe than it ever been. And as

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we are responsible for our own planet and

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do our best to protect it.

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the environment and how can government and individuals solve them. For the causes of the environmental problems, there may conclude with two main reasons. The

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pollution, the over-standard gas emission

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the greenhouse effect and makes the world average temperature rise to a higher level which

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causes the loss of the glaciers. Another cause is the undissolved plastic,

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these years many restaurants are advocating non-plastic and

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biodegradable materials to replace it, many supermarkets or stores still

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undissolved plastic take-away bags for customers. These undissolved plastics will do a

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harm to the environment,

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will inhibit the biologic to grow and restrain the soil to breathe. Government can set some laws and regulations.

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, it can set the standard level of gas emission and

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laws to supervise factories, and appropriately add some punishment to it. It should

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its strong influence advocating people “green travel”, choosing more bicycles and electronic cars. Individuals should raise their awareness and take their own responsibilities of protecting the planet. We should start with the tiny things around us

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as picking up the rubbish taking more public transport to reduce the air pollution. Reusing and recycling the things that we don’t want is

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a good habit and it can reduce the waste of resources and meanwhile reduce the harm to the environment. In all, both the government and we as individuals should play our own roles in helping our planet become better.