Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The opinion is divided on where should children study.

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a lot of people state that

home

teaching is better for children’s growth, I am sure, that

school

is still the best option. Let

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of both methods and give my personal opinion about that. On the one hand, teaching at

home

is very convenient. It’s easier to organize a day for kids and

also

for parents.

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, it is not necessary

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reaching

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school

or

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breakfast in advance.

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will never be

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by classmates or be pressured by teachers. That all do idea of teaching at

home

very attractive. But

on the other hand

, going to

school

is very important.

First

of all, it helps to understand what society is. Being around different personalities, talking and playing with them extend worldview and allow to accept everyone no matter what background they have.

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teach discipline. You can’t always do only what you want, but need to have some schedule and homework.

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, I had an experience with both methods, described above. When I was thirteen I had health problems and because of that couldn’t go to

school

for several months. For the

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I hadn’t to wake up early and go to

school

in the dark. But in

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weeks I felt lonely and most of all wanted to see my friends. It was extremely bad for my mental health and since

then

I’ve even never dreamed about not attending

school

. In conclusion, both practices have certain advantages. Even

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,

home

teaching could look tempting, in my opinion,

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way of education is still the only option.