An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poor countries to work in developed countries. what problems does this cause? what can be done to deal with situation.

Living in a
third
world country is difficult for those
professionals
who are eager to succeed in their profession and as well as with their own lives. Most
the
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young
professionals
or even some old ones strive to be in a country that offers more to them. Does your own fellow countrymen deserve to experience a shortage of
professionals
, because of the lack of support from your own country?
To begin
with,
professionals
nowadays choose to serve or
work
in more developed
countries
due to the lack of recognition and compensation in their own homeland.
For example
, here in the
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Philippines many Filipino nurses had chosen to try their luck in
countries
like the United Kingdom, the United States of America, New Zealand and Canada, to
work
as a nurse. These
countries
I mentioned compensates well in terms of salary and recognized the efforts of Filipino nurses.
Consequently
, nurses choose to serve other
countries
in order
also
to support their own families back in the Philippines. Despite being away from home, they still go going abroad to fulfil their dreams. Another example is that
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in my experience half of my colleagues choose to
work
in the UK because our salary in my current job is not that big. And it can't support their financial needs.
Hence
, we are short-handed and unable to provide the best quality nursing care we could possibly give our patients.
As a result
, the Philippines in general suffer from
this
shortage of professional health workers. Staff who are left behind are experiencing unimaginable and much worse workloads
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to due
due
this
current problem.
Thus
, staffs who choose to stay takes all the extra
work
but ,
still
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we experience maltreatments from our patients, their families and sometimes even from our own bosses. In conclusion, I think in order to convince
professionals
to stay in their
countries
, Government should
first
give much more attention to them. Like to provide the right benefits that these workers deserve.
Furthermore
, it's still better to serve your own fellow men, it's just like we need to be well compensated
first
for us
also
to provide the needs of our own pack.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Brain drain
  • Skilled professionals
  • Healthcare systems
  • Education systems
  • Economic growth
  • Dependency on foreign aid
  • Social inequality
  • Quality healthcare
  • Quality education
  • Retain talent
  • International cooperation
  • Sustainable growth
  • Scholarships
  • Professional development
  • Remote work capabilities
  • Local research funding
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