Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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Over the
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two or three decades, many forms of
medicines
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have been developing tremendously due to
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of technology.
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, at present, there are numerous alternative ways of medicine are followed.
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, these methods might be dangerous because of ineffective methods. I partially agree with
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statement and
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essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. To commence with, alternative
medicines
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are not cured some
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diseases
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all the time, that can only solve a small health problem. These kinds of
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practitioners
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professionals and they are not properly studied and trained by
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educational institutions,
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, their
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might
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a big danger towards health.
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,
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India has
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plenty of alternative
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most of these doctors are not properly studied and trained even they
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a
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medical bar council to
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mankind's health.
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, certainly,
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peril and might be brought a heavy risk.
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, some well-being's
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can solve a minimum amount of cures
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as therapy and council while countless mankind likes to follow
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method for curing their diseases.
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, Ayurvedha medicine only prefers
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herbal, so, humankind likes to take
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instead
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of allopathy medicine because allopathy can be created an extra illness and money expensive as well as
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a long period for curing.
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,a recent report by the Times of India said that more than 60% of
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Indians like to take Ayurveda
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.
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, these can be cured
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effective way. To conclude, when all things considered, I am convinced that these have positive as well as negative. I believe that humankind should be analysed which is good or bad for their strength.
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