Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Over the
last
two or three decades, many forms of
medicines
have been developing tremendously due to
invention
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of technology.
As a result
, at present, there are numerous alternative ways of medicine are followed.
However
, these methods might be dangerous because of ineffective methods. I partially agree with
this
statement and
this
essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. To commence with, alternative
medicines
are not cured some
danger
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diseases
in
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all the time, that can only solve a small health problem. These kinds of
practictioners
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practitioners
are not
the
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professionals and they are not properly studied and trained by
the
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educational institutions,
consequently
, their
medicines
might
be create
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a big danger towards health.
For example
,
in
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India has
a
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plenty of alternative
medicines
most of these doctors are not properly studied and trained even they
are not registered
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a
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medical bar council to
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mankind's health.
Therefore
, certainly,
this
is
a
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peril and might be brought a heavy risk.
On the other hand
, some well-being's
problem
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can solve a minimum amount of cures
such
as therapy and council while countless mankind likes to follow
this
method for curing their diseases.
Moreover
, Ayurvedha medicine only prefers
for
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herbal, so, humankind likes to take
this
instead
of allopathy medicine because allopathy can be created an extra illness and money expensive as well as
time consuming
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a long period for curing.
For instance
,a recent report by the Times of India said that more than 60% of
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Indians like to take Ayurveda
medicines
.
Hence
, these can be cured
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effective way. To conclude, when all things considered, I am convinced that these have positive as well as negative. I believe that humankind should be analysed which is good or bad for their strength.
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