Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Over the
last
two or three decades, many forms of medicines
have been developing tremendously due to invention
of technology. Correct article usage
the invention
As a result
, at present, there are numerous alternative ways of medicine are followed. However
, these methods might be dangerous because of ineffective methods. I partially agree with this
statement and this
essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
To commence with, alternative medicines
are not cured some danger
diseases Replace the word
dangerous
in
all the time, that can only solve a small health problem. These kinds of Change preposition
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practictioners
are not Correct your spelling
practitioners
the
professionals and they are not properly studied and trained by Correct article usage
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the
educational institutions, Correct article usage
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consequently
, their medicines
might be create
a big danger towards health. Change the verb form
create
For example
, in
India has Change preposition
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a
plenty of alternative Correct article usage
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medicines
most of these doctors are not properly studied and trained even they are not registered
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have not registered
a
medical bar council to Change preposition
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treating
mankind's health. Wrong verb form
treat
Therefore
, certainly, this
is a
peril and might be brought a heavy risk.
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On the other hand
, some well-being's problem
can solve a minimum amount of cures Fix the agreement mistake
problems
such
as therapy and council while countless mankind likes to follow this
method for curing their diseases. Moreover
, Ayurvedha medicine only prefers for
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this
instead
of allopathy medicine because allopathy can be created an extra illness and money expensive as well as time consuming
a long period for curing. Add a hyphen
time-consuming
For instance
,a recent report by the Times of India said that more than 60% of the
Indians like to take Ayurveda Correct article usage
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medicines
. Hence
, these can be cured an
effective way.
To conclude, when all things considered, I am convinced that these have positive as well as negative. I believe that humankind should be analysed which is good or bad for their strength.Change preposition
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