In some areas of the US, a "curfew" is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. what is your opinion about this.

In some areas of the Us, a ‘curfew’ seems to be imposed. Some people agree with that, but some people believe it is an infringement of human rights. In
this
essay, I will discuss the pros and cons of
this
statement.
First
of all, a curfew may be imposed in some areas that are in danger which means these areas have a high rate of criminals,
in other words
, it occurs many times. If teenagers go out at night in an area like
this
, they might get involved in a crime or be in danger. So that, they do not know how to protect themself or if they have to ask for help, I suppose that nobody could witness them.
Additionally
, they could commit crimes since they are curious about everything and are involved easily by their friends which leads to social problems
such
as drugs, robberies or rapes. As a consequence, teenagers might get arrested and have bad records
instead
of having a good job or a quality life.
However
, there is some opinion that a curfew should not be imposed. As I mentioned above. It is against the laws and human rights. Some people believe it is a good idea to let teens learn and experience by themselves so that they can distinguish what is wrong or what is right.
Moreover
, it helps adolescents schedule what is the matter of priority for them. I agree with
this
ideal to some extent. If a teen is less than 15 years old should not be outside after 9 pm. But teens over 15 years old can digest. In conclusion, in a dangerous area, it should be restricted for teenagers to go out at night. What is more important thing is to educate children including parents.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enforce
  • juvenile
  • repercussions
  • autonomy
  • adolescence
  • paternalistic
  • delinquency
  • municipality
  • ordinance
  • authoritarian
  • peer pressure
  • social dynamics
  • civil liberties
  • community policing
  • preventative measures
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