In some areas of the US, a "curfew" is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. what is your opinion about this.

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In some areas of the Us, a ‘curfew’ seems to be imposed. Some people agree with that, but some people believe it is an infringement of human rights. In

this

essay, I will discuss the pros and cons of

this

statement.

First

of all, a curfew may be imposed in some areas that are in danger which means these areas have a high rate of criminals,

in other words

, it occurs many times. If teenagers go out at night in an area like

this

, they might get involved in a crime or be in danger. So that, they do not know how to protect themself or if they have to ask for help, I suppose that nobody could witness them.

Additionally

, they could commit crimes since they are curious about everything and are involved easily by their friends which leads to social problems

such

as drugs, robberies or rapes. As a consequence, teenagers might get arrested and have bad records

instead

of having a good job or a quality life.

However

, there is some opinion that a curfew should not be imposed. As I mentioned above. It is against the laws and human rights. Some people believe it is a good idea to let teens learn and experience by themselves so that they can distinguish what is wrong or what is right.

Moreover

, it helps adolescents schedule what is the matter of priority for them. I agree with

this

ideal to some extent. If a teen is less than 15 years old should not be outside after 9 pm. But teens over 15 years old can digest. In conclusion, in a dangerous area, it should be restricted for teenagers to go out at night. What is more important thing is to educate children including parents.

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In some areas of the US, a "curfew" is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. what is your opinion about this.

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