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It is important that children with a wide range of abilities and from a variety of social backgrounds mix with each other at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, in the whole ,
world
people
 are trying to avoid discrimination. From
childhood
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children
 are mixed together from different types of families and
backgrounds
,
also
 from different religions and abilities. On one hand, I believe it's a good point the
children
 can grow together like will happen in real life. I ,
for example
,
I
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was growing up with the mixed category of
children
 at my nursery, school and even university and I am pretty sure that I will choose for my kids to go to similar mixed groups of the school.
In addition
, I had met a lot of good personalities, from different
backgrounds
, I had developed the understanding that we are different in
this
world
, and I was ready for
further
 real life, where you must
to
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contact
with
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different categories of
people
 for different other reasons than study.
Therefore
, I had the ability to not judge them, just because they are not like me.
On the other hand
, I think the way the parents want to grow the baby, it's just
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them
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the
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 choice.
However
, if they decide to grow them separately from different
backgrounds
 it's nothing about
to
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not
agree
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. In my opinion, even at ,
home
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 you can teach your
children
 about how to understand the
world
were
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where
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 are living in different categories of
people
. To sum up, it's very important to develop and to give the right view about the real
world
 to the
children
. Because when they will grow up, they need to be ready to contact with all
backgrounds
people
 and to not judge them just because they are different from each other.
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