It is argued that it is impossible to help everybody on earth with problems related to life and well-being. Many people believe that we should be concerned about ourselves and our country. I totally agree with that statement. In my opinion, helping other countries is too difficult and takes part in climate warming.
Also
, I think that some states do not prioritize their own needs.
The world, nowadays, is very globalized. Linking Words
Consequently
, Nations depend on each other to live because each of them provides resources to the others. Linking Words
However
, the exportation of resources causes too much pollution. In fact, the transport of food or goods is one of the most pollutant things in the world. Linking Words
For instance
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according to
an article published by The New York Times in November Linking Words
last
year, each day 3 tonnes of carbon dioxide is produced as a direct action of aid between Nations. So, I think that that help other countries is too contaminated and is not worth it.
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on the other hand
, many Nations are looking to give help to those who are less developed. Linking Words
Nevertheless
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this
is sometimes not well managed. European governments spend too much money on that Linking Words
while
their own people are in difficulties. Linking Words
For example
, France spends billions to help Africa and still has many homeless in the street. Linking Words
This
proves that some countries do not focus on their own problems before Linking Words
help
others.
Change the verb form
helping
To conclude
, I think it is too hard to assist everybody in the world. That causes pollution and takes money that should be used for our own country. Linking Words
That is
why Linking Words
This
essay absolutely agrees with the statement. So, people should be more concerned about their own problems before looking at others.Linking Words
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