some people say that the best way to improve public health is by incraesing sports facilities. others, however, say that this would have a little effect on puclic health and that other measures are required. discuss both views and give your opinion.
These days, the number of
sports
facilities
is surging around us in order to enhance health
issues among people
. Opinions are divided as to whether these options are effective for individuals or not. In this
essay, we discuss both views and clearly support the view that public health
can be improved by doing exercises
publicly.
First
, it is a common belief that doing some aerobic exercises
outdoor can significantly boost our spirits. We can not only breathe fresh air but also
the sound of nature incredibly has some outstanding effects on our minds. For example
, we can go to a park and enjoy some prepared sports
devices for this
reason. Consequently
, we can possibly talk with some people
or friends who are working with these facilities
. This
can motivate us to work for a long time without knowing the lapse of time. As a result
, our body will benefit from the effect of doing some gentle exercises
to remain healthy.
On the other hand
, some people
believe that these facilities
are not beneficial for people
's health
. They probably think it is a waste of money to build some sports
tools in parks or public places. Most probably, they contemplate establishing some emergency centres or even hospitals to cure ill people
. For example
, in some cities, there are adequate natural sports
centres such
as climbing mountains, jogging along beaches and so on, but nonetheless
, there is a lack of equipment for curing people
struggling with different kinds of cancers. Hence
, in their opinion, spending money on public sports
does not make a lot of sense.
To conclude, although
some people
believe that society needs more cure centres rather than sports
ones, I strongly take the view that we need to take preventive actions by maintaining our health
. This
aim can be achieved by doing some daily exercises
. For this
reason, we need to spend some amount of budget on the accessibility of the public to sports
facilities
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