A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

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Dear friend, How are you? I hope you are fine because I and you are not met for a long time both busy with life tasks.I know you moving to my

city

related to work so welcomely my

city

as a future. You work on an LLC stuff company and your owners send another branch because you tell me

last

month about

this

.Present I live in the most beautiful part of the

city

The parking hall It is a very nice and nice free part and the government provide all facilities in cities and you need anything you bay essay. The public transport is very fast in the living area because more than individuals using It and The metro train

also

available As well as in your living areas provide time to time Transportation because entire areas doing work and they use It.I meetup you with new friends because the whole people are good in

this

city

. I hope your notice my letter and give my regards to your family and you talking any information about It areas so call me my number. Your friend, XYZ.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

187 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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