An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?
A rising case of professionals,
for instance
, doctors and educators, are migrating to other industrial countries from their native land. This
situation creates some problems such
as, decreasing the level of professional staff
, harming the interests of the state. These issues can be tackled by taking relevant measures.
Running low on professional staff
impacts badly on local people
, such
as the majority of people
can not find a knowledgeable doctor, who can recover the sick people
suffering from the illnesses, and these people
must choose the professional doctor and they go to a foreign country. From my point of view, if there are professional doctors, scholars, teachers they not should go to another country which people
can pin down their issues easily. Moreover
, this
situation is equal for all professional staff
.
On the other
hand
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case creates bad
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effect
state
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the state
a state
people
grow up as an idiot by so there are is no professional teacher, scholar. Also
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,Also
people
going to other countries for study, for medicinal reasons which this
situation is creates drawbacks for improve
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foreign
country and they take money which running low money Add an article
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this
issue for its healthy future. Such
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the state
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wage
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wages
staff
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this
problem is significant for government
.These issues can be tackled by taking relevant measures.Add an article
the government
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic
Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.
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- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – Problems
- Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
- Conclusion
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