You have just learned that your friend has recently become engaged. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ● tell him/her how you found out ● explain how you feel about the news ● organise to meet your friend for a celebration

Dear John, I'm just writing to let you know that I have found out that you got engaged

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week I was surfing on Instagram, and, suddenly I saw your photos with your soulmate exchanging rings with each other.

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, one of our common friends tagged you in those photos.

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for me and I'm very happy about it. As you are 6 feet 2 inches tall, I remember that you were looking for a bride who must be at least 5 feet 7 inches tall. Now, that you've found her out. I want to congratulate you

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, and I must say that you both look great as a couple. I'd like to meet you in the future.

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month, I'm coming to your hometown for official work and would meet you. Your party is still pending, so be ready for it

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month. We'll go to a Barbeque and will celebrate together. Best wishes again

Dapinder

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Davinder

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

166 words

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You have just learned that your friend has recently become engaged. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ● tell him/her how you found out ● explain how you feel about the news ● organise to meet your friend for a celebration

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

These days, fooddays, food travels long distances before reaching consumers, and it is therefore believed that consuming locally grown food would bring about a number of economic and environmental benefits. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages ?

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1. Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that they should not go to school until they are older. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It has become very common for people to borrow money. Maby people have credit card, a mortgage and often they buy a car on credit card as well. Is this a good idea or this is too risky? Discuss both views abd give your own opinion.