A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influences you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about, explain how this book influenced you, say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am joyful that your magazine is looking for readers’ opinion on their

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. I love reading and I would like to participate in

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study and advocate for my

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: “Losing The Habit Of Being Yourself”. The author teaches his readers about

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with the incorporation of science examples, especially how our brain works, and how we can use

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knowledge to take control of our lives. It is fascinating to know that all things are made up of energy and there is a quantum world (un-material world) where every human being can access and tap into their true power.

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has helped me improve my

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and quality of life. I have found out that my environment can not dictate my destiny. I have learned great techniques to meditate and increase my awareness

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my thoughts.

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life’s meaning and guides me to find out my true purpose in life. I was blown away by

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finished it. I always come back to read it again every year and live by it. Dr Joe DIspenza is a great brain scientist as well as a writer and I am confident that his works will change millions of lives like it has changed mine. Sincerely, Nhi

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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7 paragraphs

225 words

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