Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

Many companies really on
advertisments
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advertisements
to introduce their
product
to common
people
. Though some
people
think that
advertisments
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advertisements
have lost their influence on
people
others still
beileve
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believe
in
its
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their
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persausive
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persuasive
power. It plays a crucial role in
product
placement in
this
competitive market.
Advertising
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business is a
billion dollar
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billion-dollar
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profit making
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profit-making
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industry which uses modern
tecnologies
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technologies
to their benefit.
For example
, we can market our
product
through various social media platforms like
facebook
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Facebook
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,
whatsapp
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WhatsApp
Whatsapp
etc. There are
also
numerous billboards around cities
which
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that
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attracts
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attract
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our attention and influence the decisions we make.
For instance
, a study conducted by an NGO found that
people
show
tendency
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a tendency
the tendency
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to buy products
which
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that
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have catchy taglines.
However
, some
people
are indifferent to the tactics of
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advertising
advertisement
companies. They mainly belong to the older generation and have a
tendecy
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tendency
to remain in their safe zone rather than to venture out and try new things. In some cases,
for
example
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,example
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pharamcutical
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pharmaceutical
companies have no role in
advertisments
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advertisements
and
still
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,still
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their
product
sells despite
of
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apply
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the
competiton
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competition
. In conclusion, I strongly believe that
advertisments
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advertisements
play a major role in selling products in
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today's
todays
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world.
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an
ever evolving
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ever-evolving
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business
which
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that
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implements various methods to place
their
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its
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products.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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