Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
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that one of the most successful activities to persuade the population to purchase items is advertising. Change to a plural noun
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However
,some people claim that Linking Words
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operation is definitely common and nowadays they are ignored. From my point of view ,I believe we Linking Words
can cont
ignore the power of advertising.
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Firstly
,in my opinion ,one of the most conspicuous things to persuade people Linking Words
for buying
different commodities is advertisements. Change preposition
to buy
For example
,most of the big brand names and famous companies around the world ,do not have a dealership in some areas ,especially, Linking Words
developing
countries. There is no denying that the population who live in these areas can purchase their products by watching their adverts on the internet or commercial channels on TV. It would seem that in these regions big company's products are the most popular Change preposition
in developing
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makes it clear why the impact of advertising on human beings is staggering.
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By contrast
,others believe that advertisement and showing an advert is becoming eroded among the population in the world. Linking Words
For instance
,in Linking Words
21
century thanks to education and people's knowledge ,adverts do not play a significant role in their choices. These humans say we all know what is the most suitable item for us. Replace the word
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could maximize the influence of advertising. Linking Words
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also
would create a space to consider another method to sell products. Linking Words
As a result
,it becomes apparent there is a permanent reason behind each claim via societies.
To summarise ,I personally believe human beings notice adverts and they habitually believe them because of the noticeable power of Linking Words
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trend. It is predictable that to increase Linking Words
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model of purchasing items advertising will become the biggest trade in the near future.Linking Words
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