Some experts say for road safety cyclists should pass a test before being allowed on public roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Medical care over the past century has improved dramatically.
As a consequence
, the world
's population now has longer
Add an article
a longer
life
expectancy, but it
is Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
having a harmful effect in
the Change preposition
on
world
or is this
a positive output.
One issue with an older population is that it can create enormous demands on a nation's health service. As people live longer in their old age, the chances of them suffering fromChange the punctuation
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scrious
illnesses Correct your spelling
serious
increases
. A negative view is that living longer does not necessarily bring happiness. By Change the verb form
increase
this
I mean, an older person is unable to do many of the activities that they want to do, leading to the likelihood of depression and a deterioration in their physical health. There is also
a positive side, which is elders can enjoy more with their families, grandparents with their grandchildren especially. Also
, there is the fact that this people
after having Change the determiner
this person
these people
finish
their working Wrong verb form
finished
life
they
would be able to enjoy fully their retainment Correct pronoun usage
apply
life
as they live longer there is
possibilities to explore the Correct subject-verb agreement
are
world
, learn hobbies and languages. However
, this
would happen in cases where they have a healthy life
. In conclusion, is difficult to tell if longer life
expectancy is bad for the world
. There is
advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, Change the verb form
are
this
could bring issues especially
for the healthcare system but Add the comma(s)
, especially
this
has solutions such
as technology. Technological medicine has advanced in
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at
an astonishing rates
, and Correct the article-noun agreement
an astonishing rate
astonishing rates
this
will keep going with the years, so this
issue won't be a problem in few
decades.Correct article usage
a few
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite