Some experts say for road safety cyclists should pass a test before being allowed on public roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Medical care over the past century has improved dramatically.
As a consequence
, the
world
's population now has
longer
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life
expectancy, but
it
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is
this
having a harmful effect
in
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the
world
or is
this
a positive output
.
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One issue with an older population is that it can create enormous demands on a nation's health service. As people live longer in their old age, the chances of them suffering from
scrious
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serious
illnesses
increases
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. A negative view is that living longer does not necessarily bring happiness. By
this
I mean, an older person is unable to do many of the activities that they want to do, leading to the likelihood of depression and a deterioration in their physical health. There is
also
a positive side, which is elders can enjoy more with their families, grandparents with their grandchildren especially.
Also
, there is the fact that
this people
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after having
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their working
life
they
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would be able to enjoy fully their retainment
life
as they live longer there
is
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possibilities to explore the
world
, learn hobbies and languages.
However
,
this
would happen in cases where they have a healthy
life
. In conclusion, is difficult to tell if longer
life
expectancy is bad for the
world
. There
is
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advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion,
this
could bring issues
especially
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for the healthcare system but
this
has solutions
such
as technology. Technological medicine has advanced
in
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an astonishing rates
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, and
this
will keep going with the years, so
this
issue won't be a problem in
few
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decades.
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