Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

People’s beliefs differ as to whether or not advertising is effective on individuals’ decisions;
However
, others believe advertising
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not effective anymore, due to high numbers of
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commercials
. I
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firmly
believe the former view is valid which will be justified by the rationals
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. Obviously, we have been
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facing
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thousands
of
ads
in various ways
such
as billboards, television even on
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social media
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a huge impact on people’s decisions.
First
and foremost, with artificial intelligence, companies and manufacturers use
this
advanced algorithm to monitor people
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activities
on
socialmedia
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social media
or measure the tv’s
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watching
databases to
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personalized
the commercials,
for instance
, teenagers who are interested in videos games, the
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related
compenies
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companies
show
ads
, relevant to
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industry.
Secondly
, the main policy of advertising companies is to constantly show numerous
ads
to manipulate our unconscious
likewise
, we will buy their products spontaneously.
Finally
, we can not argue about the effectiveness of
ads
on our decisions.
On the other hand
, some believe, nowadays people are busy with their hectic lives so they don’t pay attention to the
ads
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have been provided
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feature that users can pay an extra fee to skip
ads
on the platform,
as a result
, most people prefer to purchase
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option
to avoid seeing
ads
.
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Undoubtedly
, society is fed up with ad-gimmicks and trying to invent a solution to prevent these
ads
. In
conlusion
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conclusion
,
although
, we can reduce the effects of
ads
by blocking them on the internet or by buying premium perks in tv’s applications to don’t show any
ads
;
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, we can’t avoid the astronomical numbers of commercials so
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my opinion, they still play a major role in our shopping habits.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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