Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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People’s beliefs differ as to whether or not advertising is effective on individuals’ decisions;

However

, others believe advertising

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not effective anymore, due to high numbers of

commericals

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commercials

. I

frirmly

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firmly

believe the former view is valid which will be justified by the rationals

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. Obviously, we have been

faceing

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facing

thousents

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thousands

ads

in various ways

such

as billboards, television even on

socialmedia

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social media

so it might

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a huge impact on people’s decisions.

First

and foremost, with artificial intelligence, companies and manufacturers use

this

advanced algorithm to monitor people

activeties

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activities

socialmedia

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social media

or measure the tv’s

whatching

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watching

databases to

personalaized

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personalized

the commercials,

for instance

, teenagers who are interested in videos games, the

ralated

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compenies

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companies

show

ads

, relevant to

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industry.

Secondly

, the main policy of advertising companies is to constantly show numerous

ads

to manipulate our unconscious

likewise

, we will buy their products spontaneously.

Finally

, we can not argue about the effectiveness of

ads

on our decisions.

On the other hand

, some believe, nowadays people are busy with their hectic lives so they don’t pay attention to the

ads

. In the same way, social

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medias

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media

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have been provided

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feature that users can pay an extra fee to skip

ads

on the platform,

as a result

, most people prefer to purchase

this

opition

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option

to avoid seeing

ads

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Undoubtedly

, society is fed up with ad-gimmicks and trying to invent a solution to prevent these

ads

. In

conlusion

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conclusion

although

, we can reduce the effects of

ads

by blocking them on the internet or by buying premium perks in tv’s applications to don’t show any

ads

;

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, we can’t avoid the astronomical numbers of commercials so

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my opinion, they still play a major role in our shopping habits.

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