Sports events such as the Formula One and other car racing events should be banned because they are an unnecessary waste of money and create more pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Sports

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,

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as F1 are incredibly popular around the globe and are followed by a

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of people and enthusiasts.

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, it is

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believed

that F1generates a

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of waste of

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and creates pollution for what should be banned. In front of

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statement and as an F1 enthusiast, I completely disagree with the argument

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following

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reasons.

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and foremost, major

events

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as

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F1 are considered a huge income for countries and cities where

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event is celebrated. Formula one has a huge number of fans and enthusiasts that follows the race wherever it is celebrated, so, the

money

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spent by

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these followers in

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differents

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countries,

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, in

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sectors

sector

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as hospitality, indirectly boost the

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country's

economy and

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reputation. Following with arguments in favour of F1, many car brands

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as Mercedes, Mclaren and Ferrari, invest a

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of

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in

development

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of free emission cars. So, saying that, many F1 brands are already aware of

envirnmental

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environmental

pollution problems and as a solution

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incorporated

eco-friendly

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company vision to reduce

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this emissions

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worth noticing to consider, that major

events

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generate a

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of drink and food waste that should be treated with more responsibility by governing body and perhaps consider to give the left-over food to homeless shelters or

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that help disadvantaged people. In conclusion, nowadays sports

events

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such

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as f1

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a

lot

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of

money

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to the country and the city, it is an amusement event which brings a

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of joy and emotions to the people. And

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, it already cares about the planet by constructing new free of emissions cars which are

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environmentally

friendly. For all that reasons,

F1

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the F1

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event

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events

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should not be banned.