people who read for pleasure have better imagination and language skills than those who prefer watching tv to what extent do you agree or disagree.

People
can advocate their
lesiure
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leisure
time to improve their imagination and dream
by
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many different activities. Many
people
think to vast imagination and
imrove
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improve
language skills
people
have to read in their free time.
However
,
people
who are watching tv , they waste their time. I disagree with
this
opinion.
Nowdays
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people
when they are watching tv,
they
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can improve their imagination and they can learn different languages by just flipping between channels. While
people
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watching
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watch
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french
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a french
the french
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movie
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, they can improve their french language and imagine he is in France, like he went
their
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there
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.
For instance
,
their
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there
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are many different
decumentary
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documentary
channels, any person can learn about different countries, their cultures, foods, and their tourist places.
Also
, can learn about different languages around the world.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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