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Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In the globalization era, it is normally argued around the maintening of
culture
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 and tradition.
People
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 have very divided opinions on the possibility that we are losing our cultural identity or not. In
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, the world where we are living is a Globalize world,
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, we are in a place where the
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 are wearing the same clothes, watching the same Tv shows, and are beginning to speak the same language.
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 situation is completely normal considering globalization. Multinationals,
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, were built to explain what we should wear, The television programs say what
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 we should take and the increasement in travel trends creates the need to learn one unique language.
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, travel creates in the individual the possibility to meet new
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 and
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 been affect it.
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; we need to remember the importance of the maintenance of our
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 because the essence is memory,
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, it’s history. The interest to keep is not only important for the single individual but even more for the history, to be unique and not a standardized group of
people
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. Speaking different languages, having traditions, wear various clothes, allows us to understand who we are, and to have a cultural identity. In conclusion, in
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 fast era, we are losing the importance of the preservation of the
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.
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, I believe
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 fundamental to be different to do not appear
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 as an indistinct group of
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